This afternoon, I and Smantha met a group of people, one of them told us that his friend wanted to take a picture with us. We were surprised and didn't know what's going on.
We finally knew that the boy who took picture with us has been together with his girlfreind for 200 days, and he wanted to do something touched to his girlfriend. So he decided to take 200 pictures with 200 persons and ask these 200 persons to write some words on the card to wish them. He really has given much thought to the matter. How touched he is.
But I have to say, lovers are crazy, and they always have a lot of leisure time to do something romantic, but I am curious about that, how about 300 days and 400 days and 500 days? Will he still ask 300, 400 or 500 people to take picture with him? Let's wait and see!!^^
We finally knew that the boy who took picture with us has been together with his girlfreind for 200 days, and he wanted to do something touched to his girlfriend. So he decided to take 200 pictures with 200 persons and ask these 200 persons to write some words on the card to wish them. He really has given much thought to the matter. How touched he is.
But I have to say, lovers are crazy, and they always have a lot of leisure time to do something romantic, but I am curious about that, how about 300 days and 400 days and 500 days? Will he still ask 300, 400 or 500 people to take picture with him? Let's wait and see!!^^
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Hi again. I see the same type of basic mistakes here as below, including comma splices, misspellings, tenses, number problems, and missing words ("to wish them X").
You've gotta be more careful when you write. You learned the rules, now remember them when you are writing.
You only wrote 10 times when you should have 18 entries, so that's a top score of about 60 if your writing were perfect. . .I'll give you a 50 this time and hope you'll fix these problems and write enough next time. If you have other posts that are not here, please let me know.
Chris O'Brien
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